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		<title><![CDATA[St Gregory’s Catholic Primary School Album Feed - Year 6 - Crazy about Coraline]]></title>
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		<description><![CDATA[In year 6 we&rsquo;ve come to the end of our story writing based on Coraline by Neil Gaiman. We&rsquo;ve enjoyed learning about the characters and setting as this helped us to write Coraline Part 2! We impressed Miss York and Miss Taylor by including our new grammar skills: semi colons, the active and passive voice and different types of clauses.

We summarised the text like a road-map and added the feelings of the characters. &nbsp;We explored openings that would hook the reader in.

&ldquo;I was proud of the plot twist that I managed to include.&rdquo; Gracie

&ldquo;I think I improved my descriptions in my second draft.&rdquo; Owen

&ldquo;I am proud of the part when Coraline&rsquo;s daughter saw the food on the table. This is because I used the same scene that was in the original text with the same food, an omelette and bacon. I wanted to remind the reader of little facts from part 1.&rdquo; Alfie

Finally, we wrote to the author to share our viewpoint on the book, with him.
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